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[名字有多长] 【我手眼通天（第一人称绿文）】（第七章　失语的通话）

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又一NTR力作，对于男主的心理描写比较细致，情节上的衔接也做得不错。不过还是向作者提点建议，对于肉戏的描写稍微缺乏了一点，如果能再写得吸引一点就好了，更上一层楼嘛，作者要加油啊，期待后续。

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